There are times when you are Sad,
There are times when you feel Bad.
When you don’t know what to do,
Situations you are not used to..
Instead of sit down and relax,
You just get perplex…
There are times when you are Sad,
There are times when you feel Bad.
When your dreams are shattered,
Nothing else then matter.
The Head gets down & the Heart seems to drown..
Then pervades the Lull,
& the life gets Dull…
On couch full of pangs, you lay down in Fag….
There are times when you are Sad,
There are times when you feel Bad.
Dark starts to Reinforce,
As the life takes its course.
Whispers float in air,
& you become attention of Stare..
You grope for helping hand,
But there is no one to Care…
You see hordes moving up stepping on dead,
There are times when you are Sad,
There are times when you feel Bad.
But as you look down the Ladder,
You stop to Bother.
There are people in Need,
But you don’t find any Greed..
There is no Rat Race,
You don’t have to be an Ace…
The dark has gone,
As the new sun rose, &
Now you know, you will Win
Despite all odds.
There are times when you are Sad,
There are times when you feel Bad.

there are times when we are sad...
ReplyDeletethere are times when we feel bad...
and then again, there are times when we express our emotions through our words :)
well written!
@priyanka
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment :)
A good first poem....the second half is cool..portrays emotions well...hope to see more in the future:)
ReplyDelete@aditi
ReplyDeletethanx and surely you'd see more
Bro, What to say good as a poem but somehow I disagree with the idea... why look down when things are not going our way...
ReplyDeletesay for example we are going in through a tunnel with gold at other end we started but we find a big stone in way which is blocking our way so what should we try... a) came back because opening door is still open and there are people who never tried to reach the success or (b)give whole our effort to move that stone and reach our destiny... nothing personal just a view point and I know you are also optimistic....
P.S. I am not good with words but hope you understand what I wrote :P
Dude, a nice blend of metaphors, rhymin scheme and one oxymoron (though u need to xplain me dat)...anyways i m happy tune kuch to sikha mjhse ;)..and ankur ko bol comments chhote likha kare ;);)...lol
ReplyDelete@ankur
ReplyDeleteu dont need too many words to make me understand wht u mean :), i knw u better
@ashish
i never u knew u knw so much abt poetry
Hmm..its great to see you writing such stuff!!Coz I have never imagined you getting out of the 'always practical' shadow..Simple, though the flow was on/off..But seriously dude, need to get away with the rhyming scheme...I'll tell you what I feel of Rhyming when we talk over this...
ReplyDelete@jitin
ReplyDeletewell seems i missed your comment
yes i like rhyming, without it for me it becomes a prose rather being a poem
of course we can talk about this :)