i really appreciate that u ppl took time to read my work and give ur valuable suggestions. at first the poem may look feelings of another lost person jus venting out his/her pain. but neither the poem is pessimistic nor am I, thats why the name HOPE.
the poem is a critic on never ending quest to succeed in today's world through any means. parents want their child to have more marks than colleagues child or the expectation to have a bigger car than the neighbour's. during all these, sometimes a feeling of being a looser set in, which is generally not the truth.
at these times wht one needs is support, words of encouragement. but society leer at them as if they are somehw inferior to others.
wht i meant by last two paras is that, when one is feeling low, look at those who are below to you in social hierarchy. they may nt have so much resources bt they remain happy. this doesnt mean to stop looking for success but jus chnge ur attitude towards life.
Point taken dude ;)....though i had(and probably ankur as well) a bit of idea wat actually u r tryin 2 say but still, it struck as a bit of unpleasant surprise,dats y chose to put it across 2 u..anyhow, nice beginning and jaise jaise tujhe aur sikhaunga main, u wil get better only so no worries :)
ReplyDeleteBuddy ab ashish ne bol hi diya hai to maan lete hain .... baaki overall nice work keep on doing .. but only a suggestion keep trying don't look up to people without GF and still happy
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nice one m always up for it :D